I like how you have cleverly used the blue/black colour theme together with high contrast bright coloured story objects (Especially the butterly and caterpillar graphics having pink, yellow, green, red and blue colouring) this improves accessibility by helping users to easily perceive these objects on the pages.
With your text, your choice of using sans serif fonts is a great choice to enhance readability for users who are reading this story on small screen devices (Mobile devices) and your font colour choice works nicely by having white text on top of a blue background. This creates good contrast for easy readability.
It is clearly evident that you have used Gestalt’s principles in your design thinking, especially with how you have implemented your page navigation buttons.
Your navigation has been grouped and placed in the same location on each page, has the same colour and it has been visually separated from the main page content with a separating colour element. This has essentially used Gestalt's Law of Proximity, Law of Unified Connectedness and also his Law of Similarity.
Also, you have made good use of consistency throughout your entire design.
Finally, one suggestion to help improve the overall user experience is to consider implementing a current page number on each story page as to give users a clear understanding as to which page of the book they are currently reading. By doing this, it will free up their cognitive resources which will reduce cognitive friction.
Hey Birwin, thanks so much for your feedback. Yup no worries your suggestion will be considered but I also think as the audience will be children/kids so they might just rather consider scrolling page to page clicking on a familiar icon. But I can see how I can add that.
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Great story and design concept Gurnoor.
I like how you have cleverly used the blue/black colour theme together with high contrast bright coloured story objects (Especially the butterly and caterpillar graphics having pink, yellow, green, red and blue colouring) this improves accessibility by helping users to easily perceive these objects on the pages.
With your text, your choice of using sans serif fonts is a great choice to enhance readability for users who are reading this story on small screen devices (Mobile devices) and your font colour choice works nicely by having white text on top of a blue background. This creates good contrast for easy readability.
It is clearly evident that you have used Gestalt’s principles in your design thinking, especially with how you have implemented your page navigation buttons.
Your navigation has been grouped and placed in the same location on each page, has the same colour and it has been visually separated from the main page content with a separating colour element. This has essentially used Gestalt's Law of Proximity, Law of Unified Connectedness and also his Law of Similarity.
Also, you have made good use of consistency throughout your entire design.
Finally, one suggestion to help improve the overall user experience is to consider implementing a current page number on each story page as to give users a clear understanding as to which page of the book they are currently reading. By doing this, it will free up their cognitive resources which will reduce cognitive friction.
Hey Birwin, thanks so much for your feedback. Yup no worries your suggestion will be considered but I also think as the audience will be children/kids so they might just rather consider scrolling page to page clicking on a familiar icon. But I can see how I can add that.
Thanks again.
Consistent with the buttons and layout, nice work
Thanks so much Cornelius, really appreciate your feedback.